Renewing Vows

Last night I expanded Vows from a 120 word piece to a more fully fleshed out 500 worder.

I’m quite happy with the result, and have now sent it off to Ideomancer, as per their rewrite request on the story. Needless to say, I’m excited and hopeful that the rewrite will pass muster.

Here’s a snippet:

Muscle and steel. These are the lessons that dominated my mind as I imitated the Masters at training. As the seasons passed, fewer maintained devotion. The rituals eventually captivated all, leaving me alone in the Circle of Combat to complete the instruction from the scrolls.

It’s a strange little piece, but the expansion has certainly endeared itself to me.